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There you have it. The last page for this dream sequence. I love the way the first 3 panels turned out. I spent a lot of time just one the shadowing of this image, never mind the blood. I had a lot of fun on these pages and we will be returning to your regularly scheduled drama next week.

Enjoy.

The Characters and story of Inside OuT is copyright of Kathryn K Williams, Please do not copy in any way.

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If you find any errors or typos please tell me so I can fix them quickly. I have no Betas on this project so please forgive me.

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Yeey. I like the panelling here. Hitomi's hair looks rather nice there... Probably not the most ideal thing to notice after she's just hacked away at some guy.

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:iconzonzalee:
And that's exactly what I would have done in the situation too... cause you never know when someone like that will snap again.

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Yup, knew it wasn't gonna end well.

Heh.

The first panel is just WOW... very impressive!

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:iconne0geisha:
While it would be good for a psycho thriller... I'm not sure I really like how it fits into the story so far. .. Just ... eh... and I have read the parts where you say thats what you usually write... but this just doesn't fit.

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i like the 2nd panel a lot...

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I like how we can see the darker of side of being (too) posessive, also it would be cool if you ever did do a short horror manga in the future..I love the the way Hitomi looks in the first panel.

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"My moods are as black as my coffee in the morning"
:iconmonicalynnevallejo:
WOW!!!! That WAS a wierd dream!!
Its going to be a long time before she can forget about Ayumi. It is either the anime or she feels that Ayumi will think of her as a freak. Oh, and on page 44, I think, you don't have to put down "It's just a dream" because it makes it more interesting and keeps the reader wondering. It's like giving them the What the hell!! moment and make them keep reading to find out what is going on.
As for your mnaga , it is AWSOME!!! I just got around to reading from where I left off. I think Yui is a MUCH better understanding person than Ayumi. Thats just my opinion. I especially adore this page!

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Actually it all fits in when you hear the explanation to the dream. There is always a reason for everything, I'm sneaky that way.

Kat

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Read my new Yuri manga series Inside OuT: [link] or visit one of my many other lesbian series on my page.

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